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The first 2 sentences sound like me except for the “making sense” part.

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The first option, with the persona poems, seems interesting to pursue. I never read any Melville but I get the vibe you’re projecting, and I’m gonna check out the book.

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Thanks. The persona is how I started, but I'm not sure about how interesting they are as poems. I'll report back once I have written more!

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